Review Detail of LordSputnik in A Magical Destination

Honest Review Wow! Talk about finding a hidden gem! The Good: Writing quality is outstanding! Hard to believe this is the author's first novel! The system is easy to understand and giving it hard limits like that adds to the amount of creativity needed to bring out the MCs power. The amount of details added to... everything... really helps keep the story alive, just be careful about going overboard with the descriptions sometimes. The Bad: Really hard to find the bad in this one, maybe just the chapters are a little shorter than expected causing immersion to break. I personally don't like that everything seems to go the MCs way, but I also understand that it was designed that way. The Neutral: Same as before, not a fan of everything going the MCs way, so I am not going to take off for that. Also wish the chapters were a tad longer, I guess I just consider about 1500 words a minimum.