Review Detail of Balalalu in Crown of the Underworld

My honest review (said the author, it is completely UNbiased ahahah) For now, I think, the writing quality is good, I make a lot of effort in trying to avoid repetition but words like "indeed and then" keep appearing. Sorry ! Stability of update : It's the begining so there will be quite a few chapters but I cannot garantee a reguliar "income". Moreover, writing a 1400-2000 words per chapter tire me out ! (it's my personnal goal *take whip and whip myself*) The story developement is going strong ! Slow but strong ! I know whare I am going, I try to not forget importants points or details so they can remain revelant in the story later on ! (I take notes ! Hopefully without losing them at some point...) Character design and world(s) background aren't fleshed out enough with only 3 chapters so no perfect score here ! But little by little you'll come to discover both worlds and main characters (Which are our dear little Charlie & Addie (oops little spoiler eh but that's okay)) So be it then ! 4 out of 5 ! Not bad I guess. *Throw flowers at herself*