Pretty good so far for the 7 chapters that are up right now. Hasn’t been updated in a little though. I’m taking a star off of writing quality because the Mc is super edgy and is kinda silly for wanting to use a scythe as a weapon. The edginess I can get because it’s the devil fruit that’s changing him but the scythe I just can’t understand. The blade is weird and not meant for killing, as it requires a particular angle to cut and it’s more meant as metaphor as death reaping souls as they would grain. He would be better off with a war scythe, which is just a spear with a scythe blade replacing the spear tip.
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