Review Detail of DaoOfSystems in Magical Me (Harry Potter)

Yup this novel delivers quite splendidly

Hey brosef. Someone already has that name for a story about a dude reincarnating as locks.

Dude, you really gotta continue working on this story! I’ve read a lot of different hp fanfics both on this site and others, and I dare say that yours is not only the funniest I’ve read but also what I feel to be the most original, I mean you’ve really gone all out choosing an unconventional character even the most avid fans wouldn’t think of, and you’ve really managed to make it your own too! Sure you’ve thrown a system in there but it’s a comedic one and it’s also pretty nice that your story doesn’t have super crappy grammar, I mean I can ignore most if the story entices me but it’s still nice to see when it’s done decently. The only sad thing is that I’ve seen no new chapters since the last so.. it’s just sad because your story so far shows great promise and great potential. I’d beg but hell if stuffs going on in real life then sitting ones a$* down and start writing isn’t always the easiest, so I’m tots giving you a reality-counts-for-everyone card here, even though I’m close to being a fan of yours 😂😝