Review Detail of giallao1993 in Sun knight ( Marvel )

Shameless Author doing a Shameless review. Let me explain something about this story..I had this idea some time ago and wanted to see if it is valid or not. I want to create a MC that has a brain, that's for sure and want to do right thing, with no fear to change the plot. I want that his power are somehow explainable and didn't come from a random higher being. I hate systems, too easy too unexplainable, they are not logical, the only good thing about them is that they are able to misure MC strength, but I will fill that role with something more logical. Any suggestions is more than welcome, I can't promise to follow what you suggest but I will take them in consideration. Thanks Author