Hello guys, Kyosei here, I know my update stability is very very slow that I am honestly not sure what to do about it. It might take me a while before I reach the 100th chapter but bear with me. The chapters will be slow for a while in this novel because all my attention was focused on my contracted novel. I have to earn money or I can't pay for my expenses every day. I also have work I need to focus on so I am quite having a hard time writing a single chapter and if I have to push myself, I ended up sleeping due to fatigue. But once I finish the Chat group for Magicians, the updates will be frequent again. Thanks for everyone that still sticks around.
Kyosei
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SUKAKyosei:there is a possibility of romance but it will only have a single female lead. This will not become a harem
if you are talking about the turning back in time element of our novels, it is different and the story itself is different, it just sounds similar but it's not related at all. The process of their turning back in time is already a clear difference.
MochiFeelings:author, I just want to clear a doubt. the synopsis is awfully familiar with Guid Wars written by Kotario and another novel I cant remember the name. But the story really is similar or it is just the synopsis?
I see. Thanks for clarifying ^^ was really stumped there by the similarity. As long is not the same beginning and reason I'll give it a try haha. Thank you
Kyosei:if you are talking about the turning back in time element of our novels, it is different and the story itself is different, it just sounds similar but it's not related at all. The process of their turning back in time is already a clear difference.
MochiFeelings:author, I just want to clear a doubt. the synopsis is awfully familiar with Guid Wars written by Kotario and another novel I cant remember the name. But the story really is similar or it is just the synopsis?
there is a possibility of romance but it will only have a single female lead. This will not become a harem
yb48:author, does this have romance or harem?
No harem awesome 👍 i will definitely give this a try. Hope you have some good character development with the female lead and make their romantic subplot somewhat realistic and believable. Anyways thanks for writing and hope you have a beautiful day 😁👍
Kyosei:there is a possibility of romance but it will only have a single female lead. This will not become a harem
Kyosei:there is a possibility of romance but it will only have a single female lead. This will not become a harem
I stopped reading this a while ago, at 250 chapters or so, to let chapters pile up. I remembered the story as interesting, and since there are now 700 some chapters, I thought I'd dive back in. But I gotta say, your beginning is a mess. - people break in to his girlfriend's room, the day before his wedding and he wants to fight them to the death? Why? Who are they? What are they after? Nothing is explained, so it's irrelevant. - kidnapper calls, he runs to the rescue. There's a poorly described fight scene, and some reveals: his girlfriend fiancee set him up. Why? OMG, it's Kazuki! Who? Never heard of him. Why does this Kazuki want to kill him? No clue. No context, nothing explained, so who cares? - a syringe travels through time? And then you don't even say whether he uses it or what it does? - he travels back 1 year before the game, but doesn't go to see his deceased parents who are now alive during that whole year? Heartless, man. - the whole lining up scene doesn't work. I know you've changed it, but think about it. Who goes to Sony headquarters to buy the latest PlayStation? No one, because no corporation sells from the head office, (and btw, the laboratories wouldn't be there either,) they sell from stores or distribution points, for a whole bunch of reasons. If you want him to get the portable aka tattoo version, go with what someone already suggested, a draw. When he goes to the store/point of sale to pre-order his capsule, he's automatically entered into a draw for a "deluxe" upgrade. We already know that that old guy from Nexus knows who he is, so he arranges for the MC to win, and the girl is a true random draw. Of course they show up at laboratory at the same time to receive their "upgrade", so he meets her then. And that is just the first 3 chapters, and I haven't even mentioned the poor English with mixed tenses and redundant words. Mind you, I could handle that if your story made sense, which it doesn't right now. I am trying to remember why I thought it was worth coming back to this story. It could be that you do a better job as time goes on, but if that's the case, why is your edited beginning worse than it was before?
Kyosei:there is a possibility of romance but it will only have a single female lead. This will not become a harem
Kyosei:there is a possibility of romance but it will only have a single female lead. This will not become a harem