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GinOokami
GinOokamiLv135yrGinOokami

This is the first SnS fanfic that I've read and I gotta say, its really interesting. Even though the MC's personality kind of annoying for my taste. Making SnS fanfic can surely be a hurdle because you need to think many recipies, but the author really impressed me despite that. The writing quality is meh but readable. I don't know about the update stability so I'll just gave it 5*. Overall, if any of you future readers want to read this and somehow stumble on my review, this novel is really good and you need to check this out. For the author, harem is OK but if you can focus on MC x Alice for romance, I'll be a happy man.

SHOKUGEKI NO AKIRA IS MOVED TO

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GrandCaster
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And for MC personality problems, it's a bit annoying, and it's my goal, I don't want to make a perfect MC, and cliché, whose nature changes and is uncertain, I want an MC that is overpowering but has a unique personality , MC's first personality was inspired by Nakajima Atsushi from Bungou Stray Dogs, and MC's second Personality, inspired by Gilgamesh from Fate Series. Sorry if it bothered you, but as I said, I don't want my MC to be a man who only thinks of using his dick in acting. Then, for the Harem problem, this problem I'm a little hesitant, I actually don't like Harem, why? That's because if I imagine being the position of a woman who shares her boyfriend with other women, I'm sorry but I hate that. But, many of you are asking for Harem, especially Erina, Why don't I want to add a Harem? That's because the story will be damaged because there are too many interventions and chaotic plots, and there will be many characters who are OOC. So, for now, the consideration of the harem is very small. Thank you for the review, I appreciate it so much.

GinOokami
GinOokamiLv13GinOokami

So that's why the mongrel comes from lol. its kinda funny too to see the MC has dual culti- I mean dual personality. Though I said that MC's personality is not quite to my taste, its not bad at all. As for the harem, I'll just respect your decision bc I don't mind as to how many girls the MC will have. Keep up the good work author 👍.

SD_Liv
SD_LivLv4SD_Liv

Can then make two fanfics, one with a harem the other not? I know it will be difficult but still (I use a translator)