Review Detail of Eggy_does_writing in My Memory of Love

I've read three chapters and this story is pretty interesting so far. I'm usually not a fan of contemporary romance but this felt a little different. The prologue was really heavy in a good way. I was not expecting that! Other than the prologue, my favorite part so far is the dynamic between Rain and her best friend. The dialogue between her and Aria is really interesting and it makes their friendship feel very real. Neutral stuff. Tbh, when the author started introducing a bunch of different male characters within a couple of chapters (not including the brother), I thought this was supposed to be a reverse harem (or just a harem). There's nothing bad or good about that, it's just an observation I made. Now for the negatives. The grammar is kinda poor in certain parts. Rain mentions that her brother has a 'mental' problem. I feel like the author could've written that part better by describing what it is exactly since there's a lot of different mental conditions in the world. It just doesn't make sense for her to describe his condition very vaguely, as if she barely knows him and anything about his condition despite being his sister. Overall, great story!