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Review Detail of Garbelion in Land of Darkness: When Devils Unite

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There is some good world building, but the story seems somewhat rushed so far. Lots of elements introduced maybe a bit too quickly. More detailed MC would be nice, So far pretty much all we have is revenge, I would appreciate a bit more internal point of view on his state of mind

Land of Darkness: When Devils Unite

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