Review Detail of GaRage in (Dropped) Boku no Toraburu
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When I saw the cover I was quite excited since I really looking forward to ToLoveRu fanfic with badass MC (unlike yuuki rito), but my hope was shattered the moment I found out that this novel was crossover between many different anime/manga. I'm not saying crossover was bad, but writing good crossover fanfic novel was quite difficult (In webnovel I only know Akikan who write 'Start by becoming Mangaka' who was able to write good crossover fanfic). Honestly it was better if the story only revolved around ToLoveRu but with Yuuki Rito become more badass and equiped with cheat, and also more offensive toward girls (Carnivore guy instead of the original herbivore yuuki rito). Well, good work to the author, I just hope at least the protagonist wasn't wimp and dare to court girls with confidence.
(Dropped) Boku no Toraburu
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there was a fan-fiction on royalroad that did how I how the original would go where his(Rito's) dna was with two unknown alien and a few other character dna and made him a Carnivore(it was a very s.e.x.u.a.l fan-fic(hentai) but it got removed even though it had a plot without a chance to show it(only got to 5-10) I ask the author to bring it back even on a different site but so far nothing, which is too bad as it seen good and was just how I hoped the original would go just a lot more s.e.x which I was 100% okay with and it seemed that he would get all the girls)
