Review Detail of Dayside in Ultimate laziness of a guy who wants nothing but sleep
Ulasan detail
This is just trash. There is nothing good about this. It has a bunch of fourth wall breaks The humor is total garbage and very forced, it's not even remotely funny MC is seemingly a slave to some gods or something after signing something There are a ton of mistakes that make no sense It's just beyond bad. Sorry to say author.
Ultimate laziness of a guy who wants nothing but sleep
Satseku_kata
Liked it!
SUKABalasan3
Honestly I like the premise of the MC just being a lazy piece of shit and everyone being annoyed by that. It's just that you kinda just vomited out words. If it was more polished I would probably actually read it.
Satseku_kata:hahaha, you have clear eyes to notice this absolute crap. This novel is just for fun and nothing else, rather, I just put in a bunch of words and then somehow people start reading this crap that I did hahaha I was hoping someone would notice this and review this abomination I made.
well, I'm actually focusing on this novel by making it my first webtoon welp I seriously put more thoughts on how to engage the characters without making them confusing to the point it sucks and cannot be revived so I started writing it. Then recreating what should happen by minimizing the interference of the narrator in the story. I'm planning on making the special chapter or announcement only for the narrator and the characters interacts with each other so maybe that would be an awesome way to do so. It will also be awesome if you check the webtoon after a few more months because I will upload it.
Dayside:Honestly I like the premise of the MC just being a lazy piece of shit and everyone being annoyed by that. It's just that you kinda just vomited out words. If it was more polished I would probably actually read it.