Review Detail of ArthurHFSS in The Life of Yuliah IB

Well...the story is indeed very good and I have to admit that I found really enjoyable reading through all the chapters in one go. It was good enough to make read non stop, usually I get tired after reading a few chapters back to back. Only a few Original Stories made few this way, the The Mech Touch is my favorite. My biggest problem with the novel in fact is something that someone had already pointed out, the switching POVs, from third to first, and so on. I'm a writer too and I also switch POVs, but I don't do it when I'm writing the main chapters of my book, this switches only happen in special chapters. The point that o want to make is that switching POVs I think it really breaks the immersion of the reader because of how sudden it happen and abrupt, and just as fast it came, it go away. But in general I had fun reading. My favorite thing about the novel, until now, is the MC. Even though it had been just a few chapters I grew a liking to it. I just hope that the author stay focused and make the MC, and the other characters, grow as the story progress, not just in power, but in mentality as well.