I think that this is a really good novel, i only read a few chapters but everytume i read one it made me want to read the next and the one after it. The world building and character devlopment are great so far. I think you sometimes use words that are unnecessarily advanced, it makes the text feel unnatural. And ofc stability of updates but authors have their own lives to tend, so good luck managing time going further!
WidestGrin
Liked it!
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