I really like this book so far. The story has developed greatly, though I think the newest chapter so far is a little too large of a step forward. Over all, I love it! This novel gives you a thrill. I recommend editing the first few chapters, AnotherWriter31, as they have a few wordings that I feel don't sound right and kind of makes it feel more "rushed". The quality of chapters are absolutely amazing, as they are nice and long, so when readers wait for a new update, They know it was worth it. Good job, Author.
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SUKAApologies for the late reply, but can you please tell me, what exactly do you mean as "a little too large of a step forward". Was there anything too sudden for the canon of the story? If so, please tell me for improvement, I am totally open for tips and Suggestions. Thanks for Reading! And also for noticing those mistakes!