Review Detail of TheOmnipotentOtaku in The Three Heavenly Cultivations: Body, Mind & Soul

Well, this is for all the readers out there. I haven't got any comments on the recent chapters, so I request all of you to comment on what you don't like, or what is bad. That way, I can improve the story. Please review as well, which will point out my mistakes. As of now, I have 37k views, and out of those 37k people, just about less than 10 are giving comments and reviews.