Review Detail of LittleFairyOne in Transfer of the Mind, Not the Heart

Item: Transfer of the Mind, Not the Heart
Rating: 1

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LittleFairyOneLv35yrLittleFairyOne

Not cup of my tea the story began like its already on its ending just from the glance you already know that this story is going to be shitty not recommended to anyone to read it at all! Better if you write another story with the better setting!!!

Transfer of the Mind, Not the Heart

Rosana_Scarlett

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Rosana_ScarlettPenulisRosana_Scarlett

I respect that. I’m just experimenting with writing with a combination of present and past. I wanted the present to offset the pasts mood so that there is a sense of something being wrong without completely spoiling the past. Thank you for reviewing and telling me your thoughts though.

5yr