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Review Detail of AuroraSuyaris in The God System (Old)

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I don't know if this is kingdom building or a dungeon novel, or both. It is only on the early phase of the story but the development of the plot is too fast. I think he should focus developing on his dominion first before exploring. He just straight up gave some tools, build a filmsy wall and killed some monsters then goes adventuring while still level 2, leaving his people. This novel has potential. Keep up the good work Author!

The God System (Old)

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Id rsther like if it is a kingdom building