The story flow is good and it made people crave for more. The grammar also acceptable only a few unnoticeable mistakes. Overall its a very good story with nice character build. Good job and ganbatte Writer-san!

This novel has an extremely interesting and unique plot that makes you wonder what will happen next. The characters are all very well developed and the story itself has a solid foundation to keep building on. With its good grammar and story development, the novel is an easy read that doesn’t lose the reader unlike others novels that are less thought out. Overall good job and i’m Really glad I got to read this novel.

Im actually surprised. @Authour at the start your writing was a bit lacklustre but now it flows really well and the story is quite interesting. Need to watch out on how you set the scene/conflicts though. There is a really good basis for a plot and it really interests me but there is a minor issue in structure of writing which makes it less cohesive. Hmm i enjoyed how the story develops the characters, Serene was done so well, but still really wanting to see the other characters you gave lines to like the gym leader or dean. Be careful with fleshing out your character, the chapter with the dean/ at the uni served no purpose to the plot and could be written in a condensed form.

A unique novel. If you are bored of the usual stuff on this site and want to read something new, I say give this a chance. Grammar is better than 99% of what's on this site so nothing to complain about on that front too. Keep up the good work Mr./Mrs. Author! TLDR: It's good. Give it a chance.

I'm not the furthers in, but It is quite enjoyable and unique! The updates are sometimes slow but they are good! you should give this one a try I assure you it is worth it : )

A real surprise hidden gem! But you need to be patient to chapter 8 onwards to get to the main storyline :) please give this novel - and yourself - time to enjoy it slowly!

Its a good boredom read. its pretty funny too. Like it isn't really over the top and could use some work but the humor is there. I cant find the official update scheduled yet though? How often does this update?

Its pretty good. mainly comedy based but not a lot of face slapping. like the author tried but couldn't quite get the hang of it and gave up. There aren't a lot of characters so you get a decent feel for their personalities but the main character is kind of a hodgepodge of them so it fluctuates a lot. hoping that it settles down.

Hey peeps. This is the author and im just officially putting here that the average release speed will be every 2-3 weeks at most. Comments do spur me on so like; take that as you may and i would Really, Really appreciate it if more of you guys left reviews. I'm not going to beg for stones because i get that there are other books that you probably like more but at least leave what you think down here...please? Okay that's all. See you guys.