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WindMaster
WindMasterLv66yr
2018-08-09 00:16

Good Read!! The 1st five chapters were a bit too wordy but I didn't want to give up as the story seemed to have loads of potential. Now I am so happy I didn't give up, right from chapter 6 it has had me on the hook. A refreshing story which defers from plenty others I have read or reading. Hope you go on to complete this novel without any hiccups and I would follow all the way on this journey. Cheers.

Celestial Child

Rynea
4.3
62 Chs

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TruthDespiser
TruthDespiserLv11

Question, before I start reading if you can please tell me if there is any of that mushy stuff with the female lead like romance and betrayal as I’m not really into that type of stuff and like something more like True Martial world and the sorts where romance doesn’t really play a huge roll in the MC opness.

6yr
WindMaster
WindMasterLv6

The mc is op.. Period. No building up power and all like other cultivation novels. There is an element of romance and friendship. She has a thick bond with her close knit ppl and I don't forsee any backstabing. This novel is where the mc does stuffs whatever she feels like say adopting orphans and building a school to train them. She is an ok mc who create more ok friends as followers

6yr
WindMaster
WindMasterLv6

#op not #ok

6yr
Rynea
RyneaAuthor

Thanks a lot for the feedback and encouraging words. As several people have mentioned that the first few chapters are too much of an information dump - and I totally have to agree there - I will likely revisit them when I find the time. Possibly the upcoming weekend. I want to keep the story the same, but will do my best to streamline them, to convey all this information in a different way. I just don't want to focus too much time on rewriting chapters lots of times while not keeping up with new ones. I hope the weekend gives me the chance to still write 2 chapters and also rewrite one or two existing ones.

6yr
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Rynea
RyneaAuthor

It is no cultivation novel, where the main character just tries to become more powerful all the time. She already is powerful. It's more of a story of what would someone do when they are at the peak, yet not an all knowing existence. What would you do with godlike powers in the real world? Get fame and fortune? What would you do if you had a boy or girlfriend who wants a family? I try to bring up topics that are very normal to everyday readers, because many have experienced them before and then I give them a very different perspective. Why follow laws or morals when you are powerful? What consequences does it bring? The novel is more about normal problems in a fantasy word, seen from the perspective of a very powerful person. There is and will be lots of romance, if it is mushy, well it probably depends who you ask and how you define mushy. I don't like wallflower type characters myself, but I like a character who can be cute, adorable and vulnerable, even *****, without letting herself be treated like an object or let others decide her life.

TruthDespiser:Question, before I start reading if you can please tell me if there is any of that mushy stuff with the female lead like romance and betrayal as I’m not really into that type of stuff and like something more like True Martial world and the sorts where romance doesn’t really play a huge roll in the MC opness.
6yr
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NitrogenousBeing
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As of chapter 24. Story: This is the story of a powerful and confident but young and naïve alien girl who only wants enjoy life and her attempt to integrate into a magical human society. She is more familiar with the laws of the universe than normal humans, but still desires to conceptualize them the way a human would in her own mind. Very fun MC. Quality: The story has a rocky start with several chapters that are mostly exposition dum**. (Feel free to skip and skim these as they aren't necessary to enjoy the story if you are familiar with magic in fantasy.) Past this, there are some enjoyable, fun moments. There are some pacing issues and awkward sentences but the quality of writing improves as the chapters progress. Overall quality is above average for the original novel section.

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MissAvocado
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This story is fun to read. It's the daily life of an OP MC with magic, academy, romance, family and friendship. This is one of most lovable MCs I have encounter so far. 😉

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123reen
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Good story. The MC is kinda cute. The characters are nice. The grammar is good. Just try reading it cause i'm not good at writing reviews. Maybe you'll like it too. ..................................

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chghaith
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This is one of the best original works on webnovels i really enjoy reading every chapter it litterly contains every aspect i wanted in a novel (hoped we would get a bit more detailed in the cultivation process but it honesstly doesn't matter at this point hehehe :p ) Keep up the good work :D .Great novel

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RoiRed
RoiRedLv13

Really good, I look forward to the continuation! He falls into my library without hesitation This novel is so amazing, 140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...

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vie7
vie7Lv6

It's a well written novel and I am so far enjoying it. It was a very pleasant surprise to find another good novel amongst the original selection. I can't wait for more chapters.

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Kermit_the_Frog
Kermit_the_FrogLv13

It's pretty good. I like it, I'll be reading and adding to library. The writing quality is really good, there was a chapter that was basically just info dump which was a little annoying, but apart from that it's a good story I hope to not see it dropped and looking forward to the rest.

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zd4zaaa
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