Review Detail of Kermit_the_Frog in Celestial Child

Thanks for the feedback. I have to agree on the issue with the info dumping, or in general with the pacing of the story. Not sure how I will go about this yet. With a regular book I would just adapt the whole thing whenever I get new ideas for the world and then publish it when it's done. With a webnovel on the other hand and the limited amount of time I have, I will probably release a certain amount of chapters until I feel happy with the length and then go through the whole volume. There are some big holes in the story that I'm not sure yet how to fill, while some of the information could be spread out across more chapters making them feel less like an info dump. The more these ideas shape the world, the more authentic it will hopefully appear. Going through all of it again at some point will surely be necessary, until that time I hope you can still enjoy the story as is, even with all the rough edges.