Review Detail of IcyPyromaniac in This World of Systems
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For me this cheapens the idea of a system, but it is called world of systems so I can't say anything about that. The thing I can review is the plot which is all over the place with no clues as to what's going on and lots of random things happening with no explanation. It's a shame that out of I think two original novels on this site which have a star wars system one is bad because of a lack of updates and the other is bad (in my opinion) because of the story.
This World of Systems
Kites11
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SUKABalasan1
Thanks for the comment. That was my original idea behind writing this. To cheapen systems by making them not unique and something everyone in the story has. Although that does not mean they are weak. I also apologize for the story seeming to be all over the place but I just enjoy that kind of story where you have to piece together things yourself, But I understand it is not for everyone and I am by no means a master at giving enough hidden hints yet. Thank you again for your comment and I hope you stick with it. This is my first attempt at writing and I hope to improve as time goes on.