Review Detail of Elicius in Wolf Dreamer

So, I wrote this short story over a few weeks, I am very self critical and that is why I cannot rate my novel to highly. It is the first story I have written publicly and the constrains that are imposed by the basic concept have been very hard on me as a beginner. I might pic up the concept again later when I have gained enough experience to make a great novel out of it. I thank anyone who has supported me in this endeavour and anyone who has been willing to read this lowly writing.