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Anime4life001
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The plot is very creative which makes it unique and appealing to read. I just feel that the writing quality needs to be improved although I can understand it, it just annoys me because I know the story can be improved with a few tweaks .thnx for the chaps and I hope u update more frequently when u Hve the time

Descent of a Goddess: Wife could you stop of running??

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I agree. Is this a translation? Or an original story? If it’s original I feel like the other is not a native English speaker. They need a good editor to help with all the typos and grammatical errors. Also it is lacking heavily in descriptions and details. What do the characters look like how old are they. I think the script form is a mistake also.