Review Detail of Aileus in Heavens Assistant

Hiiiiii! Author Aileus here, I'm a bit insane so please put up with me 😝 I'm open to any suggestions that anyone has to offer - I'll take all critical feedback and try to improve my work! This includes going over chapters already posted an revising them, at the moment I don't have anyone helping me edit so it's just me I guess! (Gotta put all 5 stars cuz I'm biased af haha)