Primordial

Standard chinese style slop that reduces the room IQ to sound compex. The timeline is a mess. And since its a sign in system, you know the MC is going to be OP/Badass within a few chapters.

The imaginary fanfic official guidelines of Konoha strikes again.

The parents were feeling adventurous

Kinda expected. This type of story arc is pure “downgrading intelligence to move plot”. There is no way in hell, even under the sheer threat of War would Konoha deploy Kushina in Kumo. Their relationship is like US and Russia. Its like moving the totality of US’s nuclear arrsenal into russia to power their secret railgun against the Nazi.

Give this man an oscar!!! What phenomenal acting

I feel tbe story is a bit too depressing. Like the whole world is in an extremely sad state almost all the time. Must be because the MC himself is depressed

These “exchanges” seem highly unlikely to ever happen during an active war. Kinda forced as well.

Damn!!! Smart boi