TheAncientOnell
I'm an avid reader, a constructive criticizer and most importantly I'm ancient.
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TheAncientOnell2hBalas _ZEPHYR_Ch 71 Seraphina Zephyr- TheAncientOnell3hBerkomentar
he's dead
Immediately, Baki felt like someone was looking at him. He cursed, 'Shit!' Baki quickly took control of his emotions. - TheAncientOnell16hBerkomentar
doesn't using mangekyo often lead to total blindness
"No, if the foundation is too poor, even with the mangekyuo Sharingan, it will be difficult to exert 100% of the power of the mangekyõ!" - TheAncientOnell16hBerkomentar
what timeline is this
The boy was not surprised or angry because Shinji didn't remember himself, and introduced himself naturally: "My name is Haku." - TheAncientOnell16hBerkomentar
how old is he same as The canon crew[img=Your move]
The young man is Shinji's ninja school teacher Mizuki. - TheAncientOnell16hBerkomentar
how is his charkra level with mangekyo they shouldn't be low
Although the change in his eyes was brief, he knew that it was not an illusion. He had indeed opened the legendary Mangekyō Sharingan of the Uchiha clan. - TheAncientOnell19hBalas 1stDrunkenImmortal
dumb than the one who wrote them, a system slave in the making
The Quest tab has been created. Check for details bellow. - TheAncientOnell19hBerkomentar
you mean the system shop where he can buy a God Pokémon egg
More options will be unlocked with special circumstances. - TheAncientOnell19hBerkomentar
identify more like those trash observation system skill mxm
1. Identify (Lvl 5) - TheAncientOnell1dBerkomentar
probably never gonna happen
Get rid of it. - TheAncientOnell1dBerkomentar
no you didn't
'And I really have to play this role no matter what. Goddamn system!' - TheAncientOnell1dBerkomentar
sheesh here comes devine plot amor
[Realm]: Divine Bridge Realm, Level Five - TheAncientOnell2dBerkomentar
this guy sucks 😞 a loner in a cultivation world it's just a typical xianxia relying on plot amor or the system nothing special
Jiang Yuan shook his head slowly: "Senior, I'm sorry!" - TheAncientOnell2dBerkomentar
isn't he just making enemies unnecessarily can he not be rude to powerful people be Hubble take their stuff shamelessly and do nothing.
Jiang Yuan shook his head, stood up and said, "I have no such intention, please leave!" - TheAncientOnell2dBerkomentar
are you making him see the future too
[You have acquired a new Innate Luck: Ancient Double Pupils (Gold)] - TheAncientOnell2dBerkomentar
the dialogue is weird
Why the heck is this story not going according to the novel?! - TheAncientOnell2dBerkomentar
if you let the story continue like ori ginally sothen your useless why are you even there in the first place
Whole-over, I can't think of any reason why she is helping terrorists. If the story deviates too much from the original, there will be grave consequences, which I have to avoid. And why is that? - TheAncientOnell2dBerkomentar
slave
[... Mild changes are tolerable. Significant changes aren't allowed.] - TheAncientOnell2dBerkomentar
this smells like a system slave
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