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Crytach

Crytach

Lv13

I love reading in every aspect of the word, and I will continue to do that

2017-09-01 BergabungSpain
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  • Crytach
    Crytach2d
    Berkomentar

    the story is great author but my only Caveat is that you use the word "Shriek" waaaaayyyy too often, it's kinda weird. please try vary the words to add variety ... for example "Shouted, Exclaimed, Yelled, Roared, Squawk, Crow, wail, cry, shrill, blare" the easiest way to do this would be to got to thesaurus. com and search for synonyms

    Ch 13 Chapter 12
    True Magician (FatexDxD)
    Komik · Tiir_Rumibul_3715
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  • Crytach
    Crytach4d
    Berkomentar

    *Structural grasp, *reinforcement

    - It's okay, you're just learning," I shook my head and ruffled his hair in a soothing gesture. - But be more careful next time and take your time. You've managed to master Projection, Structural Grip, and Strengthening to an acceptable level this year, which is very impressive.
    Game of Thrones: King of Magic
    Komik · Tiir_Rumibul_3715
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  • Crytach
    Crytach9d
    Berkomentar
    "Nightmare~! Nightmare~! Nightmare~!" Delirium giggled, her bell-like tone not matching with her words at all.
    Gotham's Dead End Bar
    Komik · Daddy
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  • Crytach
    Crytach9d
    Balas nareikT

    also, shut up... this is a magic world where magic is everywhere... thus magic shenanigans exist, why do you have to be such a pessimist?

    Electrolysis is the process of separating oxygen and hydrogen that existed in water, both of which were flammable as all hell. My flames being the weird shit they are could apparently skip the whole separation step and burn both of those in their bonded form. In other words water might as well be fucking gasoline as far as my flame was concerned. The good news was that the water capital floors of the dungeon were going to be a fun experience for me since I needed to be extra careful not to burn the whole place down.-
    Danmachi-Hell's forge
    Komik · loskro
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  • Crytach
    Crytach9d
    Balas LordCarrotyX

    they probably mean that god's can't reproduce with mortals

    "We can't but if a god is powerful enough in a certain field they may be able to use unusual abilities despite being limited to a normal mortal body. In much the same way I myself am stronger whilst under moonlight and my brother Apollo is stronger during the day. Speaking of my brother you would do well to avoid him if you can, he is of peculiar tastes." Artemis explained and added a warning at the end.
    Danmachi-Hell's forge
    Komik · loskro
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  • Crytach
    Crytach22d
    Diterbitkan

    ... the synopsis is a bloody lie... the first gamer my ass, the literal big bag is the God of creation that just so happens to be Harry himself... Harry's gamer system is just a female version of himself. first my ass

    The Overpowered Gamer (Harry Potter) [Completed]
    Derivasi dari game · Percypendragon3
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  • Crytach
    Crytach2mth
    Berkomentar

    ... going to be honest the quality is dropping hard, it's obvious that this is a translation now as half of the stuff mentioned makes no sense...

    Ch 14 14. Shocking
    HP: I am Aurelius Dumbledore
    Derivasi dari karya · FicReader
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  • Crytach
    Crytach2mth
    Balas narwastu

    depends on the prompts, got is good bud it's not "human"

    I need beta readers and also edits because I'm truly lacking in both grammar and vocabulary.
    Multiversal: The Shop
    Komik · Charlottes
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  • Crytach
    Crytach2mth
    Balas trueidiocy_577

    I'm talking about suspicious activity, like it or not the military scans purchases for any chemicals and suspicious substances to mitigate the abuse of it, if he starts suddenly making a huge order on exotic goods. he's getting somebody's attention

    [The cure for the drawbacks requires rare ingredients that are simply out of the host's reach at the moment]
    Marvel: Tech System
    Komik · Unknown_To_All
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  • Crytach
    Crytach2mth
    Balas trueidiocy_577

    doesn't matter why buy a recipe with impossible ingredients? it's like you get the Super soldier serum recipe and have to alert shield and hydra when you start getting the ingredients... he's gonna dies fast because his system was designed by an idiot.

    [The cure for the drawbacks requires rare ingredients that are simply out of the host's reach at the moment]
    Marvel: Tech System
    Komik · Unknown_To_All
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  • Crytach
    Crytach2mth
    Balas Jazpex

    it's a big nerf, all the other systems? ooh store shop, spend points get item? his store shop? spend points get recipe thats impossible to make... that seem like a win?

    [The cure for the drawbacks requires rare ingredients that are simply out of the host's reach at the moment]
    Marvel: Tech System
    Komik · Unknown_To_All
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  • Crytach
    Crytach2mth
    Berkomentar

    ... i dont want to be funny or anything ... but engine components aren't really a thing besides the computers.

    Leo's eyes gleamed as he added, "With this engine, we can expedite the update and multiplayer development process."
    Game Developer: A Transmigrated Tale
    Derivasi dari game · Silent_Thinker
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  • Crytach
    Crytach2mth
    Balas aymen_Djema

    unless MC has made himself godlike immortal and invincible... hes been nerfed... that's how broken sentry is

    MHA: The Sentry
    Komik · Satus_Null
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  • Crytach
    Crytach2mth
    Berkomentar

    save them!!!!!! give the poor androids some bloody hope!

    NieR:Automata
    Multiversal: The Shop
    Komik · Charlottes
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  • Crytach
    Crytach2mth
    Diterbitkan

    ... it's a dumpster fire of confusion ... the story makes no sense, the wishes are senseless. the character is a Mary sue that's learnt nothing but the magic of jazz hands

    Welcome to the team Ace of the Ruined World
    Derivasi dari game · m_42
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  • Crytach
    Crytach2mth
    Balas Aldunhokoron

    sooo that was a lie...

    The Most OP'est Human? (Nier Automata Fanfic)
    Derivasi dari game · Aldunhokoron
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  • Crytach
    Crytach3mth
    Balas world_domination

    a zubat because he's fecking annoying with his paranoia

    Mew wasn't ignorant of the chaos it was causing with its mere presence. It had been a bit confusing at first but a quick and harmless dive into a mind explained things rather well. Pokemon existed on this Earth! But… they didn't? They were just a story? Well, that just wouldn't do at all! Mew was very real, thank you very much!
    Gotham's Dead End Bar
    Komik · Daddy
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  • Crytach
    Crytach3mth
    Balas Chummy

    Valentina Nappi... and she does

    But--
    Fate: I Will Eventually Become the Hero of Justice
    Komik · DaoistOneTouch
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  • Crytach
    Crytach3mth
    Balas DA_young_master

    Valentina Nappi... and she does

    But--
    Fate: I Will Eventually Become the Hero of Justice
    Komik · DaoistOneTouch
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  • Crytach
    Crytach3mth
    Diterbitkan

    want to explain why there are already bots dropping reviews?

    HP: The Magical Gamer
    Derivasi dari karya · Kitamari
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