RockiestDragon

See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza

Good start, with great prospective moving forward. The writing is excellent. The plot is interesting. The MC is relatable. The world at large can be explored, and I'm sure it will be as the story progresses. It's a slow paced 'weak to strong', so if that's your cup of tea, would recommend picking this up.

Though the writing can feel a bit predictable and cliché at times, it still clearly has a lot of potential, and the author seems to be improving as he goes. The trope of 'side characters' also breathes some fresh air, not common among books I tend to read. The world also seems have to have quite a bit of lore behind it, which can make for an interesting decipher. The grammar and spelling is fine, if a little simple and bland. Overall, I would suggest giving the book a try.

If you like gore, this is the book for you. It is a story that tiptoes the lines of sanity and craziness. In terms of grammar and spelling, there is no real complaint. Give it a try.

I hate harem. This is the only good one, because its takes a longer time with each person. No real complaint about spelling or grammar. There is a lot of potential here, keep it up.

Wolf man.

What's up Mr Narrator.

Is his spear stirring?

?????

Wake up!