skullandbones

my biggest issue with the story in general is the narrative jumps that the author does especially with characters relationships

narrative jumps especially with relationships

my only issue with it is that ya he is fat but him caring around all that weight on a daily basis should make him stronger then average especially with the weight reduction

that was really well written

hazing it happens in a lot of militarys around the world and it can be a lot worse then that

alot of people from what I could tell didn't like this chapter too much

i like it so far but I have a couple of issues with how the plots written like what events happen exactly not just general terminology at least with the lore

they said like 3 times that mot is 1 of the targets for death god just correcting that error

it would be interesting to see how he interacts with people considering both in this life and his original one he didn't have much contact with other people at all

my 3rd book hopefully this 1 lasts longer because I really enjoy writing this