Outboxer000

I really like the world bg yk nice work there..mc nd characters are good too..but there are some things which i don't like: 1)I hv read till around 200s and still pace of novel is the slowest I hv ever seen .. 2) Please increase the length of chapter ..u should take a peek into 'the perfect run' novel iIloke the word length per ch .. 3) It breaks immersion when author jumps in b/w like Fuc+ Leon ...the god is here..but we are reading a world yk ..if u wanna ask for opinions etc author thoughts r there for a reason man 4) I hv seen how u seem to avoid Rio's interaction with anyone like ...gotta do this order esme..Artemis..my company...u didn't explain how people are working and their interaction .. best of luck to you ..

I mean Fam...Rain is here...so whadu mean ? Rate for Rain Ok ok let's start... I'm gonna say it for once and all.. This is gonna be the place where I let my intrusive thoughts win...okay I like Rain..Rain like peace 🕊️ And for people asking why spoiler ?? I mean why not ?

how u r cured after ingesting poison bae

let's see how it goes ..I like the world building btw ..keep up the good work author

yeah same ...Do u know similar novels to this?

and which part are we talking buddy?

what about now storm ?

exact what i preach katty

U Impure blasphemous vile creature

right?