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Luna15_ReaderX

Luna15_ReaderX

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Just both a reader and author of poems that's starting to get into writing novels and hopes that my books will make a positive impact in the community.

2024-07-23 BergabungPhilippines
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Tulisan

0.5h

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5

Membaca buku-buku

Lencana
3
Momen
2
  • Luna15_ReaderX
    Luna15_ReaderX2 months ago
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    It was slightly confusing at first to understand the universe or world they're in, but it was covered by the compelling story. The writing style was pretty good as well but I do hope it gets updated soon

  • Luna15_ReaderX
    Luna15_ReaderX2 months ago
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    The book is fairly good, it is personally not my taste when it comes to the genre, but it did not affect on how I rate this book. The book follows a usual story trope where there is a lost princess, and the story focuses on her journey to finding her real family and bloodline. I have read a lot of books with the same trope or plot, it will be difficult to give the book a more unique story compared to the ones that me and countless of readers have already read. Lastly, the writing style. It needs a more professional use of words, and proper use of dialogue. There is nothing wrong with this type of writing style, but if you want a more broad and mature audience you would need to shift to a more formal or professional writing style