Karpa

tem que dar uma melhorada nesse diálogos kkk. Recomendo você entrar no ChatGPT e pedir uma correção dos erros de escrita na forma de uma Webnovel, ou entrar no site da Novel Brasil e ler o artigo de formatação de Webnovel, pq você escreve coisas desnecessárias como "joa pensa", sendo que você pode colocar o pensamento dele entre aspas e itálico e tá.

ele tem 15 anos e tá ainda no 7º ano?

Autor aqui! "Rebirth - O Despertar" é uma obra de um "autoproclamado" autor que não tem nenhuma habilidade escrevendo novels. A ideia para ela veio durante uma aula e eu quis dar uma aprofundada nela. Mesmo que a história tenha falhas eu farei de tudo para poder continuar desenvolvendo ela, mas mesmo assim, sei que romances definitivamente não são fáceis de serem escritos, tudo precisa ser calculado e é esse o motivo pela demora dos capítulos saírem. Agradeço a todos que já leram ela não só aqui mas em outros sites onde ela é mais comentada e visualizada. Espero que continuem comigo até o fim dessa história (o fim definitivamente vai te deixar em choque hehe).

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thanks for the chapter