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NecroBin2dBerkomentarElera
Elera, having just reached the age of 110, a milestone indicating one's entrance into adulthood in wood elven society, possessed a timeless beauty that distinguishes her even among the noble ladies of the court. Her slender figure moved with an effortless grace, a testament to her upbringing and the natural elegance of her people. Standing at about 5 feet 6 inches (167 cm), she commanded attention with her very presence. (picture)- NecroBin2dBerkomentar
Eldarion
King Eldarion stood as a testament to the weight of centuries, his once-vibrant presence now tempered by the relentless passage of time. His tall, slender frame, still carrying an air of regal dignity, was beginning to show signs of weariness. His once-robust shoulders were slightly stooped, and his movements, though still graceful, had slowed with age. His skin, pale as moonlight, bore the fine lines and creases of a life lived through countless seasons. (picture) - NecroBin2dBerkomentar
Orc Warrior
They looked very strong and capable despite their questionable intelligence, and they had something I've never seen before; weapons. The front one had a wooden shaft and some gray blade etched onto its end while the other only had a wooden staff but it was much bulkier towards the end. (picture) - NecroBin2dBerkomentar
Orc Warrior
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Eldarion
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Elera
Paragraf ini telah dihapus. - NecroBin3dBalas LazyReader8
Everyone's best friend
[You've slain Strangling Giant Serpent] - NecroBin5dBerkomentar
This is more or less how I imagine the MC, without the purple-pink dots. He is a bit cutesy as almost all newborn babies are, but make no mistake, he is already a great hunter.
Although one day I would become a towering giant, for now I was smaller than an adult horse, perhaps as big as a wolf, though certainly sturdier and stronger, but slower. - NecroBin5dDiterbitkan
Shameless personal review to get things started. what I can promise you with this novel is a dragon main character that actually acts like one, he is not a reincarnated human brained dragon with the morals of a white knight, I can also promise you excellent grammar as that is something I highly value. Furthermore the World building, character development, secondary characters and plot progression hopefully will be up to your expectations.
- NecroBin9dBerkomentar
The soldier couldn't hurt his skin with a sword when he confronted him at lyla's shop, but this weak woman hurt him with a kitchen knife? please...
"Get knocked!" The incubus glared at Arad. His eyes flashed with a pink light. Arad's body seemed to go limp for a moment, but Sara immediately stabbed him in the shoulder, waking him up. CRACK! Arad balanced himself by stomping the ground. - NecroBin9dBerkomentar
wasn't he supposed to be immune to mind effects that are not aimed directly to work on void dragons? why is a random incubus suppressing him?
Arad stood there, he could hear Abel and the incubus fighting. His muscles tensed like springs but were unable to move. His mind went in and out of consciousness. {Break it! Move! Don't fall asleep!} - NecroBin9dBerkomentar
I really wanted to enjoy this novel but it's just way too slow. The mc is still a wyrmling and a pretty stupid and unlikeable individual in general, he only has 1 harem member and there are barely any scenes of them interacting, they are permanently being pushed around by others to do their bidding. furthermore the grammar is horrible and the use of english is lackluster to say the least. conversations are awkward and lack descriptions. instead of boosting the void dragon with interesting secondary powers you gave him the cliche vampire werewolf stuff. he is supposed to be a void knight or something, why is that not explored before getting random boosts? and why not something more unique... i will try to keep reading, but honestly this story is a big missed opportunity so far. I would enjoy it much more if he left all these shady characters in Alina behind and relocated somewhere where he is not being manipulated 24/7.
Ch 119 [Bonus chapter] Dual swords - NecroBin9dBerkomentar
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Aella gasped, taking a step back. Even hitting the eye directly with her arrows could damage the dragon. But then she remembered that Arad damaged him by throwing a stone. The membrane is weak against bludgeoning damage, not piercing. - NecroBin10dBerkomentar
What does it mean when you stare? "to look for a long time with the eyes wide open, especially when surprised, frightened, or thinking: stare at Don't stare at people like that - it's rude." what about glare? "stare in an angry or fierce way". I don't know why you keep using these two words so badly. everyone is glaring and staring all the time, super immersion braking. "stared for a moment" like what is that even? complete contradiction. "glanced for a moment" is much better. when everyone is glaring at each other it implies every character is acting with hostility towards each other, which is not the case but your horrible use of the word makes it seem as such throughout the entire novel.
Ch 64 Truth of the Beast - NecroBin10dBerkomentarCh 52 1-Tier fire training II
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i find it incredibly stupid that the void dragon bloodline managed to be infected by a mere werewolf and then a vampire lord. just because he is young shouldn't affect his resistance to the curse. are you saying a lowly werewolf lord can turn the strongest race?
Ch 50 The paladin's quest