Tokima_Suryo

The legend is back

The conversation between character need to be improve, they sound like npc😑😑

You over explaining it, it getting boring fast if you do that

How long your exam going to be bruh

Of course some of you going to say if you dont like this fanfic just go find other one then, what make you think i say this for, i already to deep to turn around, author you need to improve that is what i trying to say here, please dont leave a mental scar from this fanfic to me.

Am i the only one who think mc is dumb, i mean he upgrade his waterbending to lv 10 and other stuff before fighting the centipede saying it enough to fight the fire soldier and then afraid to kill the centipede with the bs reason one could find "its have parents", dude mc already geno an entire forest of wolf and other animals just to collect the exp, whats more he tires as sh*t to destroy fire camp and let me guest what happen next he got spotted, surround and for some reason he either escape injured or other earth bender going to help him for obvius reason such as "he need help/we couldnt let him die for us" and start blasting sh*t at that camp and come up victory, like whaaaat!!!

Damn what a chapter