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wise words… many never understand that

This might need to be reworded… the earth mage wasn’t week towards the crabs rather the earth mage had a damage bonus against the murderous crabs

I wonder if Snow Goose will eventually get swallowed up by Phoenix group or they form a guild. Couldn’t he run two teams but have ability to run a Raid down the road? Still enjoying direction of the book and the smaller sub-plots and dynamic relationships.

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

Need to have a status of abandoned instead of marking it as completed making people think there is an actual ending.

Honestly almost stopped reading because of this chapter. I get that it was a great emotional invoking tool, but still…

Shouldn’t it be a minute in the dream is a moment in reality?

I wish more authors would do this. Too many times they don’t distinguish between inner monologue and external and even if they do they’re not always consistent with it. Thx again!

If you’re going to have a typo, that’s the way to do it.

I bet it was supposed to be 1,000 Billion. Translation thing I bet