WanderingCritic

I agree, and that’s literally what I’m doing in mine, but there’s nothing wrong with time-skipping to canon as long as it’s done correctly and doesn’t feel too much like a plot convenience.

You could potentially have him do both; teleport somewhere and Timeskip, maybe stuck in a cocoon like Viktor was during his fusion with the hex-core, and thereby still ageing up. But, whatever you decide upon, I’d cross Demacia off the list. We all want to see more magic be used, so having Orion hop from one magic-hating country to another is counterproductive to his development as he’d need to keep hiding his abilities, which would likely end up hindering what could’ve been achieved elsewhere.

It’s true, I did my own research on the place and came to the same conclusion, but I accidentally wrote right past the opportunity to mention them however, so I ended up cooking myself in that regard.

You’re onto the hard part now my friend, altering the original story so much is a steep slope to climb - especially for newer writers.

I was being deadass when I said slow you updates down, I need to support the smaller creators too 🙏

You’re gonna have to slow down the updates my friend, I don’t have the stones saved for this.

You are the second author I have EVER read who has managed to balance the harem trope in a genuinely believable way. Congrats - you get my stamp of approval.

Tell me about it, I have almost no time to write nowadays.

For the plot 💪