1_EyedKing

lmaoo

im guessing they r standing upright like humans on two feet?

her coats pocket

wouldnt it be better to write "single swing" or "single swing of his axe" instead of single swing of his? coz that feels like something is missing in this particular sentence. I get that you might have meant "his single swing" or maybe im just overthinking this.

wdym by that?

LMFAO

Oh I see lol, well if you’re looking for something good, checkout “primordial villain with a slave harem” …I know how it sounds, but it’s good..funny and has good consistent stuff mc has a stable personality the girls aren’t randomly added and have their own arcs and backstories and there aren’t endless amount of girls and mc isn’t OP for no reason straight off the bat

😂

Doesn’t matter she’s still a divine knight…you’re telling me Aphrodite can’t kill Nathan simply because she’s a goddess of beauty and not a warrior..it doesn’t make sense. She’s still a divine knight who is what ranked 5? Or something and it’s only been a few months and max a year since he was killed by her and she must have some other spells or magic she can use..the story is simply inconsistent dint try to justify it…if the author fixes up his pacing and other stuff it would be much better

Yo author? Why do you not reply in comments or in the discord 😭🥹 I’ve been asking stuff for days along with other people