shehab_reda

that is not a villain mc you should delete (villain) from there and the mc is not power enough You have to check yourself ===================================

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firstly, good job, it is a good story but there is something you need to focus on 1. It's a villain story you need to make the mc more evil 2. The story is so slow ,you need to speed it 3. the mc doesn't have something special he must have a blood line or something 4. the system is not generous with mc and hve no good features 5. it's a villain novel with villain mc you must make him more OP .....thank u for the novel, and keep going ......

i don't like this kind of novel. Sorry, It's so slow so eggs he will be stronger and will find his mother with another man and may he find that he have brothers from this man then he will find that there is a greater power stand behind them and then he will say"8 have to revenge thaem all " 🥚🥚🥚

you need to develop your writing quality and arrange your ideas 💡 to make a full story and good world background .. and you need to change the mentality of the villain and make his plans more villainous and more understandable

i wish that he is a villain i dont like the heros i hate them so i really wish than he be villain and kill his parents and make the hero suffer

awesome 👌 its agood beginning i wish you could continue this way of mc building and world building and what i really loved about the book that is no harem no female lead no romance (i hate it caze how a villain can love he is a villain, "no emotions, no feeling , cold heart") and i asored MC's selfishness go ahead 💪🔥 your book will be great 👌💀

it was awesome till ch 280 why all the characters on that planet mc mc wife mc enemy mc lover in past character mc maid someone who met the mc in the past 100ch why did you make this like that mc enemy was in another world in another dimension he was so far also mc's wife she was so far and weren't heard about her the Immortal world people, how did they get in this place you was writing good but you made the biggest drop in this novel so don't write a villain story ever cause you have feelings the villain mc shouldn't have feelings has no mercy no love

the worst worst writer ha ha ha

Bad Bad Bad Awful Shit I started reading this story cause it's a cultivation story and system i thought that the hero will be the strongest and will not care about anyone .... There is alot of things i didn't like in this novel but the most thing the thing that made my hate the story and try to broke my mobile is that When he discovered that his maid (who comes from a normal mother and a father who barely entered the real world) has the highest spiritual root in the world and not only that but the highest talent in the world to surpass everyone in the world and to outsmart him (who is familiar with the story, its events, characters and his cheating system) oh.. I think the second maid will be strong in a similar way.... 😂😂 What a cringe, what a story.. At best I almost broke my phone what an awful story Stop writing please 🙏 cz ur writing made me hate novels of the same type, even though I only read this type.