AbyssalDragon231

What does that mean

I forgot to think about the cosmic sense and all that stuff so yeah that’s on me

Yes, he can just teleport wherever he wants, but he didn’t know the exact star section where he was supposed to be. He needs to either know the exact exact place where he’s going like coordinates or have been there before what I’m saying.

Thank you I’ll probably make that happen but in the more reasonable way because technically he is like three months old by the time he met the other devil I don’t know how old he’s gonna be in that time because I may change a few things but I’ll see what I can do but if you like we’re gone so much make it happen not because you like her because I also like her like I get it

Think about it, but I don’t know how to add into the story so if you could think of a way for me to added into the story then I’ll add her but if you can’t do that, then I won’t add her because I need to make this stuff. Make sense like with ophis and yasaka you know what I’m saying

Have you seen Thor Ragnarok because the final battle is Thor versus hela so look at that

I want to get mad, but I can’t because you’re right, but you have to understand this like my first time riding like anything. I don’t write a lot of stuff and I don’t want to write a lot of stuff. I do so I will take this is collective criticism because I’m making a Deadpool fanfic, so if you really want to see me right better or if you even care and if I post that you can find that out, but thanks for the constructive criticism

Yes, I made a mistake. I also want to have the Phoenix force in there, but then it was already too late. Already posted the chapter so I had to go back after I finished that chapter I just made today I had went back to reread everything and then I seen the mess I’ve made so then I’d fix those to make it more understandable for readers.

All right, I can understand nebula but I think Gamora had a bad life so I’m really gonna want her to be in there and I don’t really know how to fit this universe. I don’t think I’m gonna have her in the universe because I’m not really focused on the avengers that much is gonna be like him going throughout the universe then he’s probably gonna go into a different Multiverse like DC but it all depends if he becomes. A one above all level being.

Yeah, I will replace nebula with like Gwen Stacy because I like Gwen Stacy she’s like smart and then she can be like a intern for his company. He’s not just gonna be a intro broker he’s gonna he’s gonna make company with all types of shit like technology biology all that shit so yeah, should be an intern.