Asurathoth

'I do my best to become Ben Tennyson in the MCU' Omnitrix, name, clothes, etc. 🤦🏻‍♂️ The author could very well guarantee the ability to keep the artifact invisible, turn it into a tattoo or even have the artifact in his soul or spiritual consciousness. The problem is the inability to think, imagine and create new plots that do not include the cliché of discovering/realizing that he carries every day and at all times a strange green 'futuristic' watch on his wrist that by 'coincidence' has the same symbol that certain aliens have and that are being seen frequently. The difference between 'transforming directly with a thought' and 'turning the top of the strange watch a few times, pressing and transforming' are absurdly glaring. After all, the first is inexplicable to a certain extent, and something can only be attempted through the study, understanding and analysis of DNA. Therefore, it can be considered safe to a certain extent and will not cause 'many' problems. However, the second is naturally extremely dangerous, because no one would ever willingly accept the fact that a teenager carries with him an artifact that allows him to transform into different races with incredible powers through the watch on his wrist. Of course, the biggest problem is that the artifact itself is external force, so it naturally 'can' be taken away from him and placed in 'safe hands' for better handling. It doesn't seem to be too difficult for the protagonist to create some gadget to make the watch invisible.

He could have chosen May Parker, Daisy Johnson, Darcy Lewis, etc.

🤦🏻‍♂️ It only took him two days to reach this level of popularity, so i can only say that it is too unrealistic. We know from the way he reacted that he was at least a child in mentality when he died in his previous life and even though he is a teenager now, he still acts like a child. Act/react violently first and leave the thoughts for later. He transformed into a race that is considered the most intelligent in the universe and did not think for a moment about the consequences that would come from his actions. Not to mention that the author said that by transforming into Grey Matter, even if he came out of the transformation, the protagonist himself would become more intelligent, which does not seem to be the case, unless it is only IQ and EQ that is ignored. In this messed up world, a time traveler with a father, mother and sister who still dares to seek to become a 'shining beacon' on the surface can only be called an idiot at the very least. He could very well find a way to stay hidden behind the scenes, but in my mind, the author made the need/quest for fame/influence from the protagonist's previous life accompany him in this new life and become even more unbridled to the point that it has become his inner demon in a way that his subconscious managed to fool even Grey Matter's intelligence. Of course, it's just a random thought, don't take it seriously. Anyway, i expected more.

I think that if he really had the intelligence of gray matter, the first thing he would think about would be whether he would be transported to the mirror dimension at any moment. However, taking into account that the demon who sent him to this place did such an act with ease and still guaranteed the choice of any artifact from the omniverse, then it shouldn't be difficult to modify the entire world/timeline to fit someone who shouldn't be there. In fact, i really can't understand why the authors make their protagonists commit the extremely foolish act of writing in a notebook a lot of meta information, secret information, past/future information, information that he shouldn't/wouldn't even come close to knowing his entire life, sensitive information and so on. The second thing to do when he became gray matter would be to think about it immediately and turn the pages he wrote the information into ashes.

I wonder if choosing 'artifacts' as 'golden finger' is really a good decision, after all, an object can always be passed from one hand to another. Of course, I haven't watched much Ben 10, so I don't know if the Omnitrix can be removed from the wrist or if it was ever stolen in the original story, in any case, it's always possible to cut the arm off and take it away. I believe it would be more viable to grant the protagonist an ability that allows him to do the same thing the Omnitrix does or simply to directly transform the artifact into an ability, the worst thing is that in MARVEL there are also some ways to steal, seal, copy and extract powers voluntarily or not. Of course, I think my focus is probably because I prefer true power rather than power granted by external means.

I thought the author would make the protagonist look for some ways to avoid certain 'problems' and take some precautions before going out swinging around New York. After all, the protagonist knows very well how crazy this world is, he also knows the bad consequences that occur if they discover the true identity of a superhero or even anti-hero and villains. I don't think it's very difficult to discover Spider-Man's identity, after all, he returns to the same house every day(although he probably doesn't return directly home dressed in the costume), he leaves his clothes hidden in an alley stuck to the wall by webs often and he is very visible as he swings around the city all the time. Not to mention that his villains usually discover his identity and run straight to his school. Just look for two specific places, the first is the place where he usually appears for the first time in the day and the second is the place where he usually disappears at night. After that, all someone need to do is set up hidden surveillance. Should be able to see him leaving an alley without his suit or even find his house directly. Remember that it is not difficult for people like Nick Fury, Tony Stark, Reed Richards and others to find his true identity using different means at hand. Nick Fury already has a constant SHIELD surveillance system focused on 'supernatural factors', he will only collect blood, fingerprints and everything he can from the places where Spider fought and count on the assistance of the agents to discover his identity in a short period of time. Tony Stark will directly let Jarvis analyze the sound of the voice in the videos in which he appeared in conjunction with a satellite to keep constant surveillance on him to find out everything he wants to know in a matter of minutes or hours. Reed Richards will create some gadget in the form of glasses that allows him to see through his mask.

Gwen, with the intelligence she possesses, after thinking a little after discovering that she had awakened super powers after being bitten by a spider, should have already found it strange that Peter had said those two sentences; • "And if anything unusual happens, call me." • "You'll find out soon." The first sentence can be dismissed as concern, but the second is impossible to disguise, it is quite obvious to anyone with common sense that by saying the second sentence, he already implies that he knew what was going to happen to her. In fact, even if they were in a relationship, which they are not, at least not officially, it would be difficult to believe that Gwen would be as scared as the author described, that she would be shocked by the perceptive sensations after awakening or that she would simply call Peter and openly say that she had awakened super powers. I don't remember Spider-Man's superpowers being difficult to control, although when he wakes up he ends up breaking some things, but he usually manages to regain control very easily in a very short time, in addition to having an extraordinary perception that is basically instinctive and doesn't cause any problems in adapting to it. You could say that it only takes three steps, which are: taking a deep breath, emptying your mind and regaining control. I don't know if it's worth letting Gwen talk openly about her powers, because it's pretty obvious that she's going to become the Ghost Spider and go around doing justice. The protagonist is obviously not the model of a fair superhero, he'll definitely try to influence her or end up being influenced by her. In fact, we all know that SHIELD, Tony Stark, Reed Richards and a few others always know the true identity of those with spider totem powers because none of them are very professional in keeping their identities secret. It's pretty easy(i think); Just analyze the place where she frequently appears when she's first seen in the day, analyze the place where she frequently disappears at the end of the day, based on this focus and keeping surveillance through hidden cameras should be enough to find her locker. Not to mention the blood she leaves behind after a fierce fight, fingerprints in some cases, her voice that doesn't change and so on. If they find out her identity, they'll definitely find out about him sooner or later, especially if they try to get to her by targeting him. Of course, at the end of the day, it's the author's decision, no matter how outrageous it is, so the author could very well swap Gwen Stacy's personality with Mary Jane and leave it at that. Life goes on and let's keep reading.

I believe that with his intelligence, it should be very simple to create a vigilante costume using some easily accessible materials that are difficult to trace. At least I think it would be much better than buying a mask and a coat in a random store as it would be easy to track. If the protagonist are afraid of meeting Daredevil due to his ability to remember others through their heartbeat, just don't enter Hell's Kitchen until he find a way to avoid it.