BrokenandBored123

I have sent texts longer than your chapters, and with how infrequent they are I keep debating whether I should delete it. However I do really like the story.

I just can’t get through the early chapters, the mc bounces all over the place, claiming he knows almost nothing about the series, then recognizing random woman number 199474. Not to mention the constant bitching is incredibly annoying.

Poorly translated Chinese fic. Could have been good with a proper translation, but it leaves out a lot of words or just becomes gibberish. If someone ever feels like doing an actual translation please let me know.

Sought out, not sort out.

That was the explosive seal on the paper tags, like the ones he had been wrapping on his kunai before he threw them. Like when he was killing rats in the dungeon

Seriously what the fuck, half of the first chapter is pointless rambling about comics and anime that DONT EXIST, then mad cackling about how he will be richer than god by introducing the shittiest games in history without any skills whatsoever.

Do you know what punctuation is? At all?

Thirty? Try forty five.

Boruto was complete and utter trash, we don’t talk about that, it never happened.

I mean the absolute randomness of pulling out weapons based on tech never shown in universe. Clearly.