Okay I will exchange the review, I will review tomorrow after reading your novel and judge it

Did I met you in inkstone server?

well, that's her name

Should read this novel now

seems interesting

The title suggests a horrible word that basically no players wants when playing video games and that is grind (except for veteran players)

Dempsey roll

I agree, especially if the villain faced some tragic event in his life or basically he may be trying to save the world or something but in a wrong method though

Whenever I hear villain, I feel so good and satisfied especially if they are strong enough to even break heroes, even for a second.

yeah lol

Thanks for the gift, I appreciate it.

I corrected it but some elements of the story may continue to change according to different situations and thanks for pointing it out about the goddess since I just realised I can't change her for remake version to avoid getting in trouble later. Anyway thanks

She does look cute, I wonder how strong, in terms of combat mode, she will be in future.

I can't say anything about this but if you are looking for romance and harem like genre then perhaps you may not find it in my novel. Mass murder is supported mostly

Thanks for the gift, I appreciate it

EDITED: NOVEL- BASED ON AN GAME: DRAGON QUEST V: HANDS OF THE HEAVENLY BRIDE REMAKE INFORMATION- MAY CHANGE DEPENDING ON THE SITUATIONS MAIN OBJECTIVE- MAKING SILENT PROTAGONIST BE EXPRESSIVE ADAPTATION UPDATE- NO GUARANTEE ABOUT THIS NOVEL BEING FAITHFUL TO THE ORGINAL CONCEPTS OF THE GAME UPDATE STABILITY- ??? AUTHOR'S THOUGHT- THE NOVEL WILL NOT BE ABANDONED DEPENDING ON THE NOVEL PERFORMANCE GRAMMAR MISTAKES- ✅ BAD/GOOD REVIEWS- ACCEPTED ✅ CRITICISM/PRAISE- ACCEPTED ✅ JUDGE THIS NOVEL- DECIDE YOURSELF ANY SHAMELESS THOUGHTS- READ MY FANTASY NOVEL 'Between Light and Darkness: The Void'

The concept of Outcasts is brilliant and the writing style is top level. I won't reveal anything about the plots but I must say this that the main protagonist's character development looks far more better than any of the characters. Strange powers, the brilliant plot designs along with overall world building that has so much potential to surpass many of the top novels. I hope that you get contracted soon or accepted by webnovel if you ever apply for the contract. Well done and keep going. Thats's it...

The story is well structured and the plot is intriguing enough to maintain the interest. Not better than Kill the sun or Shadow Slave ✅But it is enough to be on one of the top novels, depending on how the plot and ending turns out.

Nice, you didn't give up on the novel

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