Moz_Al

Spoiler warning: After Reading 220 chapters, I just don't understand how MC manages to have all the information about the story's plot ahead when he just read 50 chapters- 50 fucking chapters while on a bus ride. It is beyond absurd to think that he read only that much and knows what happens up until academy arc and further... like this own novel is 250+ chapters done, yet the academy arc is far off where the main cast will be introduced. Also my assumption as to why more than half of the characters in this novel have such fucked up stupid mentality is because of their cultivation which is affecting their mindset. I mean take Lucavion himself, ever since he started cultivating the star swordsmanship, he's become arrogant and confident which was not seen before, now I know before he wasn't an awakened and all that but mentality doesn't change so much with just that. Since the cultivation progress is sometimes shown to be dependent on philosophy like for Valeria who has been stuck at 3 star and Lucavion says she needs to let go, This is also proof that if you are cultivating a mana art, chances are you will likely become stupid or less intelligent. The wind knight who spared Lucavion when he could have easily killed him goes on to show that the characters have a psychiatric disorder and this guy might be a sadist or battle fanatic who only lusts for strong matches. Why else would he spare an Enemy in a WAR. Don't say plot Armor because even that plot Armor needs some explanation or the novel is fucked up with plot holes. this is my review after reading 222 chapters.

this is turning into some Danmachi shit with Lucavion acting like Freya

Novel is pretty good actually I would have given complete stars if only it had good pacing. you need patience to read a novel like this. It will have repetitive scenarios from different POV. You will have shit load of descriptive info dump in every chapter. The plot is slower than a snail, Everyday you would hope today Something will happen but no there is 70% monologues, info dumps and stuff, 10% dialogues and then 20% action, sometimes no action. Currently there is a tournament arc that I think is about to hit 100 chapters span. the characters are written with complex personas. Again there is the repetitive cringe shit of description. like Lucavion always smirking, vitaliara teasing and playful. And for the last fucking time, Valeria and her convictions, her code of knighthood and displined is rubbed on more than half the novel . Are we readers having a dementia that every chapter you had to remind us that she is this kind of characters. the things author does to spam wordcount. still pretty good story going forward just hope that all the rubbish he writes get lessened in future. sometimes I read a chapter like being forced to read because nothing happens at all in that chapter.

Lucavion will be humbling her. first start of the revenge coming soon

Reviewing Novel after 200 chs. all the FL are Stupid and evil. Ashlyn, Arianell, Shyamal. Ok Christina is somewhat sane. the cherry on top, the most evil and vile being Esmeray and her goons are getting more hateful as story progresses. needles plot holes l, no explanation for her actions. Some times Mc also does stupid things .but 99% of his problems are the FL from Delilah to every woman he has been close with. if he wants a peaceful life he should cut all ties and live in some mountains. he is shown in this novel with nothing but suffering and endless pain. that girl Shyamal has the audacity to say she loved him very much. sorry if he has a lover like you, he doesn't need an enemy in his life. This novel has turned trash. I am dropping it because there is an extent to stupidity and twisted story. No meaning behind the villainess mother's actions. oh and don't tell me her goals are beyond understanding as of this moment. it has been dragging for a long time. even though it's 200 chapter which updates irregularly and slow, there is no revelation of the plot holes. Go f yourself Plot you don't exist here

important for what like the next 30 or so chapters until they die right ?

A notice to all: Next chapter is a filler, read the next one after that, cause that's where the two draw out their blade

A notice to all: Next chapter is a filler, read the next one after that, cause that's where the two draw out their blade. I too just skipped the chapter after reading the intro of the next one.

Does anyone else find the repetitive narration of the same aspect in different povs and depictions frustrating. it sure as hell is for me, the plot is barely progressing in last 3 chs. but then again, I am reminded that this is the same author who is writing Hunter Academy, there also same scenario. Why waste time drilling so many content that feel like filler?

does the author not know how to time skip