Mu_Shin

Seeing as no one else is doing it this chapter, I have decided to remind you that your writing is great, your story is great, and you're great. :)

May I ask why you seem to have such a grudge against the Catholic God?

This seems pretty good, but the beginning is near incomprehensible due to the lack of pronoun substitution. What I mean by this is that you always say 'she'/'the girl' for 2 girls leading the reader to not understand who exactly is being talked about. If you have the time to go back and fix this, I would recommend using 'office lady' or a derivative of such since your writing style is centered around not revealing her reincarnation/bodily changes. Anyways, nice chap. :)

Why did they have to meet up if they had an established mental link?

En vu of the multiple likes on my comment we can assume that either it was not explained, or done so very subtly. Thus, I do not find myself at fault of any lack of attention whilst reading. I hope this comment finds you in a better mood than my previous one, if not I simply ask for you to properly punctuate your reply. Good day. :)

2years later and the onion stock isn't running low... 😭

This is good! And really long too(heh, that's what she said), I hope you can finish this story, maybe even with a frequent update schedule(no pressure, but... lul)

Thx for the chap, hope you keep writing. Either way, I hope life treats you well in future ventures.

Apple juice. P.S.: researchers have proven that consumption of AJ can positively influence your pp size... just sayin...

Goku solos lol