Friend, I understand the feeling and I understand that at least in terms of grammar my novel has deficiencies, but at least you would have given it three stars because that affects the classification of my book

Hahaha, things that could happen to me. But hey, don't worry, this month will be worth the extra coins you spent[img=Feeling it]

Josef, thanks for your comments! Although I read them a little late, I made sure to read every comment you left me! And about the spelling errors, I will try to fix them soon [img=Your move] And I really appreciate you taking the time to comment, it makes the job of writing much easier!

She would complain every day but she would continue doing it out of pride hahaha

Haha, don't worry, I think I can speak for any writer that what we love most are the comments of our readers!

Could it be~? It's something that could actually have happened! And thank you for commenting on so many chapters, you don't know how happy it makes me! I would respond to the other comments but I think it's a little late hehe I promise to respond to your next comments!

Excuse me, at what point does the protagonist's gender change?

Hahaha sorry, I originally thought it was going to be like that too, but I couldn't pass up this opportunity. But it's not all bad, now I'm taking this novel even more seriously and I'm going to publish a daily chapter. And I even plan, when I learn English, to publish two chapters a day! (Although it will be like in a few months) So although I'm not telling you to buy privileges or anything like that, I hope you continue to enjoy my work with the normal chapters!

I'm sorry, the first chapters were just starting with this and I didn't know how to control it, in the next chapters it improves.(⁠╥⁠﹏⁠╥⁠)

Yes, it is not my first language, in fact I use the translator. Although I think I've improved a lot since the first chapters, so I think the spelling errors have decreased. In the future, I hope to learn English, although that should only happen around chapter 400 of this novel. So I hope this doesn't discourage you from reading my novel![img=Relaxed]

Kayla understood that too late.

Oh really? Although I think this Pov is pretty good, I tried to use a combination of a third person and first person Pov, so that the reader can understand the world a little better but still learn from it along with Kayla or any other character. If you can tell me what seems confusing to you, I would appreciate it, it would help me a lot.

There are passive and active skills in this world. It will be explained in more depth in the future, but for now I will tell you that foresight is an ability that is always active with what is in your field of vision (although there are times that some effects can be suppressed, this is explained in a few chapters later). As for why they didn't seal the foresight ability… I can only say that the Goddess didn't consider it that important, not to mention that she didn't have much time.

I really appreciate this!!! Although tell me, what did you think of my work, do you have anything you don't like, such as points of view or scenes that are not explained well? If you have any constructive criticism, don't hesitate to say it, it will help me a lot to improve! (I love you reader who left me my first review)

Thanks!

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Thank you for your comments! Although it took me a while to correct it since I was applying for a contract for this novel (Wish me luck~) I did it as soon as I could! On the topic of ghost or mirage, I think ghost looks better since these are usually transparent, and I think ghost or future ghost describes the effects of Kayla's ability very well. But still thanks for correcting me, I really appreciate it!

I love you dear reader who has been correcting my work! I've seen every comment you've made and corrected almost all of them, and you can't imagine how happy I am that you took so much time on this. That is why I have decided to leave this part of the novel as it is to properly thank him and record his great help. And I sincerely hope you enjoy the story I'm creating and forgive this useless writer who makes so many mistakes![img=Cries]

Correct! [img=Feeling it]

Thanks for the comment~You're the first one I've received, and get ready, chapter 4 is about to come out! And what's coming is strong!