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Megww5mthBerkomentarI like this attitude
"I'm the one laughing now, Smiling Fang." — Drayan threatened Fang, with a sinister smile on his face.- Megww5mthBerkomentar
The boy is very confident, not bad
"Today will be your grave, Smiling Fang." — Drayan pointed the dagger at the Fang lying in its paws. - Megww5mthBerkomentar
Fight time!!!
"I found you..." - Megww5mthBerkomentar
Poor cent, he just wants to eat
Cent only appears when Drayan tells him to devour something. Any order beyond that is refused. - Megww5mthBerkomentar
Cent is a king with his pride
He could sit on Cent as well, but since Cent is a devouring creature and also a King, Cent would never let Drayan sit on top of him. - Megww5mthBerkomentar
I can tell it's a beautiful wolf
However, this wolf had three eyes, with golden irises. The third eye is slightly larger and is located in the center of the forehead. - Megww5mthBerkomentar
The boy is experienced
Drayan had been through here a few times before, so he was familiar with the place. - Megww5mthBerkomentar
Brutal!!!
Blood gushed from the head stump of the decapitated body and painted the ceiling and wall red. The body fell to the floor, forming a pool of blood. - Megww5mthBerkomentar
Nice job
He then kicks the human. - Megww5mthBerkomentar
Let's go
There were seven centipedes surrounding the boy named Drayan, a survivor with an evolved body. - Megww5mthBerkomentar
I predict the death of this animal
I have to take this opportunity and kill him while he's weak! But what kind of monster was able to hurt 'Smiling Fang'? - Megww5mthBerkomentar
This technique is cool!
"Three! Now!" — He shouted, throwing a spinning punch in the air, which caused na overwhelming shock wave, sending the dogs flying towards the classroom exit. - Megww5mthBerkomentar
Two alphas
Cent is considered the king of the green centipedes, Smiling Fang is the king of the purple fur dogs. When two Kings meet, they will naturally want to fight in search of conquering the territory. - Megww5mthBerkomentar
Okay! They are very strong!
Rumor has it that when these four meet, countries will be destroyed. That's why each dominator of the region stays in his territory. - Megww5mthDiterbitkan
I will say my honest opinion. Positive points: The story works well, and the explanation of how the world works is good, and I like how the story revolves around genes. The description is simple, but I can understand it easily. Negative points: The development of the story is bad, the narrative is very long and becomes boring to read. I think reducing the narrative, or describing some scenarios better could work well. I won't say much, since it's at the beginning of the story. I'm not an expert either. I just wanted to convey my sincere point, I hope it doesn't bother you.