I highly enjoy writing but don't have the time or money currently to make it my full-time thing so my upload will be sporadic. Give me feedback from anything from suggestions to spelling mistakes
Tulisan
membaca
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Membaca buku-buku
starting on chapter 2
You are writting it as if its a manga/light novel/comic where there are images to go with it but there are no images to go with it. you need to write it like a Novel not a comic
I am working with someone on Fiverr to illustrate mine
I like the story so far but if you had someone drawing for you so you could continue writing how you are currently it would be far better. there's very little to no story background and I there is a lot of history its good
solid start but its written as if it as images to go with it but it doesn't it not a light novel or manga its a novel so write it like its a novel
when writing a novel you must start a new paragraph when someone different is talking. when the description ends start a new paragraph and each time someone else talks new paragraph
thank you for your valuable input
you have to remember it is a book, not a visual novel. Please learn how to use quotations and character names so I don't need to bend over backward to figure out who's talking and who's not