Dinori_Ah

I love the idea of a rival or an enemy for Shiori

I think so

Why?

Peru will demand you

TFTC Man, you have a great MC and a great begining, just dont stop

Bullet was used for MC army

Why you have to put a system? Man i just do not like them, they usually make the character too powerful with Training. But if you are gonna make your But if you're going to make your protagonist train, then why the system? It only simplifies things, it detracts from your progress and if handled poorly, you could feel that the story is about the system and not the protagonist. However, I'm not against stories where everyone has the same system or similar things, just because it's justified and not cheating. I branched out a lot, this is something personal and not against the novel

Future problems with tenryubitos.

Man, a Mahito fanfic. Only you hace to know that

Sorry the question, but will you give Ross a couple? (If yes for me the best one would be Yamato, cause’ of the size of both and the fruit)