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to be honest i feel, sorry for her, she tried to change but Gotham didn't give her a chance to change, hope bruce can change her, or help her with the condition..
bro has a betting addiction i tell you, if he didn't have anything he would have started selling his brothers....
Snape was called out as Severus, Snape...not prince, soo ?
proof of Gods absence?? which one is this ?
i can't say you are perfect there are some flaws but nothing more, story is good but I think you don't have a clear picture in mind, I can't say anything about your MC because let's be real he doesn't have many lines and relationships with other feels out of place ( i guess because he transmigrated Directly 15 years, after and didn't have any control ) and the things you mentioned like grammer and short chapters it's not a big issue people make mistakes and it's okay and i would have a short chapters then just info dumps or too much fluf, story is over all good but I think you can build more of his personality.