HomuraRyuu

losing braincells reading the first 3 chapters, so i stopped. grammar is bad, i don't even know what you are trying to say. sigh it's very bad. not deserving 5star with this kind of writing, so idk how u get 5 stars, this always happened to romance book, have high rating but it's not even that good of a book.

rough and tough to read

the FL is annoying af, like i said the mc just wasting time on her when she clearly don't like him back, and i hate this type of stupid drama. it feell sooo stupid, she not even special. she even likes some other guy, god. useless pathethic shtty drama.

how this stuff get so good of a rating? this novel is not even on the "mid" level, i don't get why someone would want to waste their time on someone who clearly doesn't like them one bit. the drama is ass, pathethic. and what u mean by mc is "eviler", evil ur mother.

u gotta be the dumbest f in id1iot in this novel, i pity your parents to have a failure like you, the world would be way better if you would just uninstall yourself. whoever have connections with u whether ur parents relatives and friends, they gotta be the unluckiest mfers on the planet.

yo, i feel like this nove will be filled with unnecessary drama, please tell me im wrong

love but 2.5?

i like this novel, enjoyable fun. and most importantly YANDERES!!

it's true that ur writing of this chapter cause a confusion, but not for me, why? cause im smart. muahahahahaa. jokes aside it's not that bad tho.

ew novel, plot is so-so. or maybe it's bad. this novel is a novel about game, mmorpg, but there's literally nothing about the game stuff. there's no status screen, no attribute, no item's description, no leaderboard, no shop, even there's nothing about the scenery of the game, there's literally almost 0 game elements in the novel? very very poorly written. world building as shtty too. i mean if there's a technology as good as the vr one might assume that the world they're in are futuristic af, but no, it never been mentioned any sort of futuristic technology except for the VR aspect. it's like there's 0 effort by the author. and then the harem, their relationship are very very shallow, the girls were like love the mc without any reason or something, it's like they're collectively just love him suddenly. and it's not even clear whether the mc love any of them or not, they just having sex it's like friends with benefits, there's no real relationship, and it's poorly written too, like after mc hooked up with one girl and just move to another without deepening their relationship or smtng. it feels shallow. and then R-18 scenes, they are sometimes were well written, clear, detailed, hot and fun. but at other times it's so badly wriiten it's like very rushed, and sometimes the interaction feel like npc-like kind of interaction. there's still so much to say but i'll move on to another thing, the mc's EX she a psycho, she cheated on mc and then wanted him back, she very toxic and manipulative, she incredibly stupid, and 400 chapters in the drama between mc and ex are still on going. and she has reverse harem too. it's very annoying. fight scenes, they're all mid, just the same stuff nothing to note. and then the EVENTS in the game, they're all just the same thing? just keep on repeating the same event. wtf? it's just the same kind of event over and over and over again.